Finally, something original
GOOD:
The idea was new, the music fitted the mood, the sounds were good, the graphics of the room were good too.
BAD:
A lot of the movement was simple tweening. Learn FBF, or at least add some keyframes. Also, the attacking screen was quite bad. Some graphics of flames, etc. on the destroyed factions would be good. The arrow as also not good, like i said, animate it, don't tween.
OVERALL:
It was good, i liked it. Especially for a first submission. Reminiscing on how shite my first was, i give you a 4. Hopefully you will complete part 2.
Good luck man.